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What are your academic goals and how do you plan to achieve them?

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What I lack in sheer talent I make up for with hard work. I have this drive to excel to push past my limits and to reach excellence. It’s this drive that has me up till 3 a.m. promising myself I’ll read just one more page before going to bed. Because of all this I will be graduating high-school with over 100 college credits I plan to graduate with both a high-school diploma, and an Associates of Arts in Pre-medical science. I plan to attend the University of Miami, through the aid of scholarships, and once there major in Biochemistry. I plan on taking part in the Medical Scholars program, in order to secure myself a place in the University Of Miami Miller School Of Medicine. I’ll achieve my goals the only way I know how, through hard work, sleepless nights, and with my drive to be the best I can be.

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ESSAY REVIEW

In my estimation, this is the clearest and best of the essays you've submitted here to date. You get directly to the point, and convey what you need to convey in simple, straightforward, effective prose. The only thing I would query here is whether you've not put things back to front. I wonder, in other words, whether the second half of your essay ("I plan to attend the University of Miami etc.") should not be the first half. There's a natural transition already there between the last sentence and the first.

Best, EJ.


Submitted by: superman7129

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There are many noble and good academic goals to put on a college essay. 

First, you might want to give a bit of context about yourself, if your story is inspirational. For example, there are some people who will be the first to go off to college in their family. So, to obtain a college degree might be very aspirational. Or if you had to go undergo certain hardships to succeed academically, you might want...

There are many noble and good academic goals to put on a college essay. 

First, you might want to give a bit of context about yourself, if your story is inspirational. For example, there are some people who will be the first to go off to college in their family. So, to obtain a college degree might be very aspirational. Or if you had to go undergo certain hardships to succeed academically, you might want to put this down as well.  A few years ago, there was a story of a homeless person who graduated from Harvard!

Second, another good academic goal is to excel in a certain field to benefit society. This can be a good angle. One of my friends wanted to study medicine because he experienced physical ailments his whole life, and through this wanted to help others. 

Third, you might want to simply put down what interests you and how you plan to study it and why you want to study it at a particular place. To be the best in a field to the best of your ability is a noble academic goal.